13/06/2008
best poem i heard
I found a poem in Space #3 by Jonah
I enjoyed “School” because school is everything he said. School can be fun sometimes and others it can be boring.
On part that stands out for me is “You gather a bunch of cool little things to remember school.” I think this is a nice part because over the yer in school you will gather knowledge, thoughts, etc. about what happened in school over the year. After you gather all of the information you will have a memory.
Another part that stands out for me is “You feel like a dork to do so much work on a piece of paper.” This stood out to me because I feel like a dork too when I do so much work on one peace of paper.
I look forward to seeing what Jonah makes next because i enjoyed the poem.
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