10/06/2008
crashin down
I found a story in Space #3 by {two24}.
I was happy “Crashin Down,” because it sounded a bit intresting and it was cool I could relate to it.
One All that was on her mind was the learning the surf the waves of Cali and to meet celebrities that hang out in California.That stands out for me is: ““No, can’t girls and boys be best friends!!”” I think this is COOL because THERE IS NO OTHER WAY TO DESCRIBE IT!!
Another sentence I liked was “bye, don’t have too much fun without me Natalie” that I loved was: “Dag it Charlene!! You haven’t seen me yell yet!.” This stood out for me because people call people and use slang which is a cool thing
I look forward to seeing what two24 makes next, because this was cool and it shows alot of culture. from the blacks which was cool.
Text posted at 12:34
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