Aaron at EBAFF, Bronx, NY

If you cared by:GISSEL

I found If You Cared  in Space, Issue #2 by Giselle I agreed,” because sometimes you want to shut people out to clear your mind and they seam kinda annoying sometimes.

One sentence that stands out for me is:Thoughts. Cut through paranoia, like razorblades.” I think this is scary because the way she express it seems kind of scary and frighten me a little. But other than that it is a good poem and i like it!:)

Another sentence that I was worried about was: “Hide behind my tears made of black rainbows.” This stood out for me because well it don’t think it stood out to me because you kinda scared me with that one.

I do very agree with  that poem(a little bit)One reason I say this is i think you’re gothic and it’s nothing wrong with that but it sounds so dark and for some reason I like it Another reason I agree with her is that sometimes you need to be alone and I found out that, that is a good way to make things easy.

I look forward to seeing what Gissel makes next, because it calmed me down and i see things differently now it is a cool poem. Also I hope you make another gothic poem like that I like them.