Aaron at EBAFF, Bronx, NY

these are some good sentence starters

I found a I Am in Space, Issue #2 by Elizabeth.

I cried “,I Am ” because… it felt so real about her grandmother

One {sentence/part} that stands out for me is: “ I am from the big stores and the big school to the big trees. I am from the love of my Grandmother.” I think this is sad because… some people lost their grandparents or never did see them

Another I am from Platano con Salami. The way my family acts the way love we all have. that I cried was: “I am from blue jeans, hoodies, and gold hoop earrings.The smell of the new fresh soap makes me feel good..” This stood out for me because… because it stays so original and nothing is wrong with it

I do agree with elizabeth that… One reason I say this is… Another reason I agree with her is because i some things are living short wise so accept were your from

I look forward to seeing what elizabeth makes next, because…that was a good poem how she stayed right with the poem and the flow.also how she stayed original and didn’t change it at all